Nice! There's a lot of emotion in this haiku, it's very sad. It has that feeling of despair and heart-wrenching sorrow. It's simple yet beautiful. Great job!
Thank you! I was hoping to get the "lonely" and "sad" vibe across. I'm glad you think it worked!
Nice! There's a lot of emotion in this haiku, it's very sad. It has that feeling of despair and heart-wrenching sorrow. It's simple yet beautiful. Great job!
ReplyDeleteThank you! I was hoping to get the "lonely" and "sad" vibe across. I'm glad you think it worked!
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